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  I had just finished baking a maple pie, Kumajiro had helped me make it this morning. I set it on the window sill so the wind would hopefully cool it down. "Who are you?" Kumajiro asked, "I'm Canada, you know? Matthew?" I reminded him in an annoyed tone. He never really remembers who am, it got really annoying to remind him all the time.

I turned my back for about 5 minutes so that I could clean the kitchen, when suddenly I heard Kumajiro shout, "The pie! Someone's getting the pie!". I look back at the window and see two hands reach up and grab it. "Ah! Hey! Leave it alone!" I screamed running to the back door. When I got outside the pie thief had already ran away, with my maple pie.  

Kumajiro came up to me as I walked into the house, I sighed and took a seat at the dinner table. "The thief got our pie...do you wanna make another one?" I asked him quietly. "Yes, now lets go out and get some maple syrup from the trees." He said pulling on my hand. "Okay, let me grab a bucket real quick." I said getting up, and then grabbing a bucket that was on the counter. I picked up Kumajiro and went out the back door once again.

Me and Kumajiro always went to this tree in the woods behind our house, it had the most great tasting syrup. After filling up the bucket, I set it aside and smiled at the small bear. "I'm hungry." He whined, "Yes, Yes I know." I said petting his head. I picked up the bucket and held Kumajiro's hand. Thats when I saw him.


"The pie thief!" I shouted, as I saw the hooded person hiding in a bush. I set the bucket down and run after the person, grabbing them and tackling them to the ground. They kicked me in the stomach and then scratched my arm. "Ow!" I said holding my arm, watching the hooded person run away. I get up and walk over to Kumajiro, where I picked up the bucket and walked inside.

"Who are you?"

"I'm Canada, Matthew Williams. Your owner." I said as I set the bucket down on the counter. "Now lets make another pie." I smiled. I grabbed all the ingredients needed and got out a mixing bowl. After baking the pie I decided to just set it on the counter to cool. I looked out the window and saw that it was getting dark outside, and I saw the twinkling stars in the sky. "Well I'm going to go watch tv, you can have some pie if you want." I told Kumajiro.

I turned on the tv and sat down, watching a hockey game. About an hour passed by before anything interesting happened. I then heard a knock at the back door, I get up and walk over to the door. I open the door and see someone sitting there, with an empty pie pan. They take off their hood and look up at me, and they have...cat ears?!

"Were you the one who took my pie?" I asked nicely, noticing that it was a young girl. She nods her head and smiles at me, pushing the empty pan towards me. I pick it up and hold it in my arm, thats when I noticed her dirty and torn clothing. She looked homeless and that's probably why she took my first pie.

"Do you want to come in?" I asked the girl.

She nods her head and walks in.



-To be continued-
Let me know what you guys think.
In my opinion I really think this story will go great, seeing how every new part is planned out.
Oh and Reader-chan is a kitty and doesnt speak english, she just understands it. Confused?
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italyisadolphin Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Request - Wolf Lalala Request - Wolf Lalala <img src="about:blank"> Fangirl Squeel Emoticon ITS SO FLUFFY!!!!!
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Clockwork-Reaper Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Filled . Buckets. *hides face* aaaaaah! (Home stuck reference with the buckets)

This is awesome though! Off to the next part! :)
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ArisaKZ Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
THANK GOD!

You have NO idea how glad I am that you also thought about that as well!
 Tamako Kitashirakawa (That's a relief) [V1] 
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Clockwork-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! Not alone-ness! :iconairpunchplz:
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:iconlunaangel-eclipse:
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
KAWAII~!


(need i say more~?)
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alaskajones Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tolayly adorable just sauin
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abigailthefox Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute!
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tuckanimefangirl Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
I like it!
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tuckanimefangirl Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
I laughed and imagined Canada screaming ''the pie!!" in a soft and shy voice and then saying,''I'm gonna give him a one-four!"
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist
Yay I love it when I'm a neko!
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red-blackPandaRose Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist
Whoo, I have Cat Ears :iconwootplz::dummy:
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CrazyHetaliaLover13 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconw00tplz:
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TiniEve Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yup! :D
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DubstepCat Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Seems a bit fast-paced.... But I guess that's alright.
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OmgGurlItzLoloAgain Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
i need part 2 this instant!!!
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
its in my gallery, along with part 3 & 4
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OmgGurlItzLoloAgain Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
Oh...Oopsies x3
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
heheh its fine, you didnt know :)
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OmgGurlItzLoloAgain Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
*does puppeh dawg eyes* ....Hmmm what should i do in the mean time? ...Hmm- OMG(Big Sean Voice) IS THAT CHAPTER 2???!!!!
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YUP! :D
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OmgGurlItzLoloAgain Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
i read alot so i can get ideas xD i wrote some fanfics before but i didnt like them so i deleted them but i started writing a new one i already have 2 chapters.check it out some time? x3
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
of course ^^
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DemonChan22 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
Mattie is so sweet to not be mad at me, Nya.
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He forgives easily ^^
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:icondemonchan22:
DemonChan22 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
I know i'm like that too most of my friends calls me Canada too XD
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Im Canadian, so I forgive easy to sometimes. XD
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DemonChan22 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
well I'm Netherlands but i act like a Canadian XD
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD thats amazing
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DemonChan22 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
even to bad we don't have Maple Syurp here in netherland but i tasted it a few times and i love it better then dutch syurp >w<
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ive never tried dutch syrup, sounds amazing though. Ive had maple syrup though, its wondeful
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Drizzle-the-hedgie Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for forgiving me.
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
well reader-chan you are adorable to Mattie!
Who couldnt forgive a adorable kitty?
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Drizzle-the-hedgie Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yeah thats right!*Smoothes hair and ears with hands*
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
xD
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Mirviana Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Man I was expecting Canada to be mad at me T~T It's a wonderful story~!
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Naw he forgives you, because your so dang adorable~
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Mirviana Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconimcanada-plz: x3
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cicilykittycat Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student General Artist
awwwwhhhh! nya!~
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:icontinieve:
TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
nya! :D
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cicilykittycat Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student General Artist
i woved it mrooowww!
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:iconhelchou:
HElCHOU Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so cute! :iconhappytearsplz: god canada why u so forgiving?
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:icontinieve:
TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
because reader-chan is adorable! :D
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:iconhelchou:
HElCHOU Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh yeah.. i nearly forgot :iconcuteamericaplz:
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:icontinieve:
TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
xD
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HElCHOU Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhappytearsplz: Canada is so forgiving! Please write more!
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'll have the next part posted today :D
Im glad you love it!
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YES! *GLOMPS*
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heheh *hugs* Around when part 3 or 4 comes out. There is a surprise for Canada, but thats all I can tell you ;D
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAYZ! *HUGGLES*
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